Small plot inconsistencies fix. Updated Chinese version to reflect these changes. Details below (spoilers). Chapter 14: Roel now says that she is able to tell Honor apart from Red July. This is more consistent with her own method and how Honor's method works. It's also less confusing considering the conceit of the chapter (The detectives are pretending not to know Honor was acting as Red July if Roel can't actually tell Honor from Red July, then it unnecessarily complicates the situation even more). This change also helps foreshadow the events of the Sixth Stage. Chapter 23: 772's alternate theory about the method of death had a big flaw that some reviews of the game have touched on. Namely, you can't choke yourself to death, much less cut off your own head, for the simple reason that you would lose consciousness before you died. I've changed it so that now he suggests a simpler and more reasonable "hanging" explanation, where gravity does the work of slicing off the victim's head rather than the victim themselves.