First off, let me thank everyone for their interest in this story. I have received reports that there are some issues to resolve (particularly in the last three scene in this version). Please know I am working on it. :)

There have been reports that the story is confusing and goes through a lot of characters very quickly. I get that. The story is complex, so I am working on a chapter system to break the story apart into more logical chunks (in the same game so you don't have to buy something else for that) so it is clear who the main character is within a storyline (there are multiple protagonists depending on the storyline).